Peer Review

Is there a rationale? - How does it relate to the subject area?

• Storytelling, experiential

Strengths?

• Looked at folk art, storytelling

• Historical tapestries/murals, as well as diagrammatical illustration like maps

• Good contextual research

3 positive points?

• Combining drawings through collage

• Observational drawings

• Symbols, and the abstraction of forms

3 areas that could be developed?

• Automatic drawing, children's drawing, drawing from the unconscious (meaning over aesthetic)

• Try creating patterns, or assemblages of the motifs you make

• Drawing from memories. Continue making it personal

Synthesis, contextual analysis and practical explorations?

Does it all make sense together? Do elements feel connected?

•  Great link between historical maps, folk art, etc - your hometown and your experiences

What are the next steps with the research project, practical and theoretical?

1. Think about personal aspect. Drawing from memories

2. Base on your experiences (I think this is key)

3. Try making patterns

4. Automatic drawing

5. Contour drawing - geography in an abstracted way

6. Explore use of colour